Critique wanted (Page 1 of 2)

from the other side;
http://youtu.be/N28eo5fG7GQ

What is your bow weight and draw length?
No criticism, but an observance and question; it seems that most (all) thumb ring shooters readjust the ring after (before) every shot. Does the ring move that much, should it?
  I have never shot with a thumb ring.
Will

It depends, when i practice speed shooting, there is no time to readjust.

I use turkish style, here some video of that.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GqqStGeYsj8&NR=1

I am not as fast as Murat Özveri, yet...

I think turkish style with shorter draw is good for hunting, it is easy to aim and, as you can see, it is very fast style.

Korean style with long draw is bit slower and harder to aim.

Element of forward releasing when I look at your right shoulder, most shots. No back tension.

Second video forward releasing corrected by third arrow but creeps in a bit towards the end. On release, try to let your arm come to rest with a count of one, two, three from release to finish, following the same path each time.

That is a style of follow-through that is only practiced by certain people here in Korea (noteably, archers from Hwanghak Jeong in Seoul).  There is a group that advocates it, called "Onkagzy" http://www.onkagzy.com/ (in Korean, 온깍지).  If you watch Chinese or Japanese trad archery, their release is very similar.

Hun,
What I'm seeing is that rather than relaxing my right had at release, I'm just relaxing, as a consequence my rt. hand follows the string for a few cm. before the arrow clears.

True, but the onkagzy method uses an exaggerated follow-through.  Other Korean archers' draw hands do go back, but just not to that extent.  Still, whatever gets one's arrow down to where they want it to be is the way to go!

I've always been taught (read) that the release should be made within the "push-pull" motion at the point you reach your anchor, and if you come to a halt at anchor,(to aim) then the "push-pull"motion should be picked up again before release.

  For me, one of the most elusive of proper technics.

Well, some progress from my shooting...
Not close to perfect, but let´s keep practising..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5wnugeD … e=youtu.be

I can do no better than you for drawing and release.
But I would like to suggest you to try instinctive nocking (similar to Hannu's video) as traditional archery books told to keep eyes on target/enemy and I think it 's cool  .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UneaU7VD … AAAAAAAAAA
now you can crititize my relase :-)

you should critisize me, only shooting since 1 month, beat me pls :-)